tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2159352127192240615.post3506416916874243404..comments2023-03-24T08:25:02.510-06:00Comments on Smith 9H 12-13: David Merkel Memoiranneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2159352127192240615.post-10592451480622077912012-10-01T19:26:54.582-06:002012-10-01T19:26:54.582-06:00David-
I think that your speaking was excellent; h...David-<br />I think that your speaking was excellent; however, you did stumble over yourself once or twice while you were speaking. I thought all of your pictures were great and really helped tell the story of your memoirs. Also, I liked your drawings. The only thing you might lose a point on is your speaking. Other than that it was great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2159352127192240615.post-77430991285995343242012-09-30T18:26:29.168-06:002012-09-30T18:26:29.168-06:00Nice job David. I liked the drawings. You did a ve...Nice job David. I liked the drawings. You did a very good job speakingg except when you stummbles a few times. Your visuals were very good which tied everything together.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2159352127192240615.post-68011970010352987662012-09-30T13:39:35.072-06:002012-09-30T13:39:35.072-06:00Good Job,I liked the drawings but I think It would... Good Job,I liked the drawings but I think It would have been cool if they went while you were talking. I also liked how you were able to show not tell the events. I agree with D.C I think you stumbled a teeny bit but overall there weren't a lot of messups 3/4Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2159352127192240615.post-83352567000996905592012-09-28T17:01:43.271-06:002012-09-28T17:01:43.271-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com