David- Your organization is somewhat unclear and more emotion could have been used in the narration, but besides that you did a very good job using digital media to your advantage to support and add effect to your narration as well as gaining and holding the audience's attention.
I felt that I did a very good job on my details, introduction, and conclusion. I had very good visual aid, and I felt my voice thread had good pictures and captions. My speaking was a little weak, because I sounded a little nervous, and I did not show as much emotion as I should have. I think this is not an Advanced voice thread, but it also higher than a proficient.
David I think overall you did a good job. I feel like it was a little unorganized and at sometimes unclear what the overall theme was. Everything other than that was very good and I really enjoyed learning about your grandpa.
David overall I think that your presentation was amazing. Great use of emotions and complex words. Your intro and conclusion I think were the best parts of the whole thing. Very fantastic overall. Awesome.
Nice job David, way to include many details. Good job making the reader want to keep listening. Great job overall.
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ReplyDeleteYour organization is somewhat unclear and more emotion could have been used in the narration, but besides that you did a very good job using digital media to your advantage to support and add effect to your narration as well as gaining and holding the audience's attention.
I felt that I did a very good job on my details, introduction, and conclusion. I had very good visual aid, and I felt my voice thread had good pictures and captions. My speaking was a little weak, because I sounded a little nervous, and I did not show as much emotion as I should have. I think this is not an Advanced voice thread, but it also higher than a proficient.
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DeleteDavid I think overall you did a good job. I feel like it was a little unorganized and at sometimes unclear what the overall theme was. Everything other than that was very good and I really enjoyed learning about your grandpa.
ReplyDeleteDavid overall I think that your presentation was amazing. Great use of emotions and complex words. Your intro and conclusion I think were the best parts of the whole thing. Very fantastic overall. Awesome.
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