Not all of my stories were memories, some of them I just kind of explained. I also could have included more pictures and snapshots. Before you watch know that I kind of took a different path.
I think that you did a good job. You added lots of emotion to your voice which made it more interesting to listen to. You could have added more pictures though. Overall, good job!
I think you did a good job. After reading your comment it makes me understand where you were coming from when you put this together. I would have liked to see more pictures and I was confused about the part with your brother.
Great job. I liked all the personel pictures. The memoirs were all solid. My favorite was the rose bowl one and the boomtown classic. Your voice seemed a little far away but overall good job. Organization: 4 Content: 4 Verbal techniques: 3 Media: 4 Preparation: 4
Nice Job Jake. I liked all the pictures of the pieces you wrote. Your seemed to be very quiet and you seemed shy. If I were to grade your project, I would give you a 3 average.
Jake! I thought that your memoir did a great job on letting us get a preview of what your life looks like. Nice work keeping your presentation under five minutes but I thought that your voice could have had some more emotion. Also, towards the end your voice thread, your voice sounded more choppy. I think it was because you had recorded some of your sentences differently. The only thing I would add in would be a reflection piece in order to tie together all your memoirs and leave a lasting impression. I could not figure out what your overall theme was, but other then that nice work!
Not all of my stories were memories, some of them I just kind of explained. I also could have included more pictures and snapshots. Before you watch know that I kind of took a different path.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you did take a different approach, and explained all your memoirs more. I also liked your visuals
ReplyDeleteI think that you did a good job. You added lots of emotion to your voice which made it more interesting to listen to. You could have added more pictures though. Overall, good job!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job. After reading your comment it makes me understand where you were coming from when you put this together. I would have liked to see more pictures and I was confused about the part with your brother.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job. I liked all the personel pictures. The memoirs were all solid. My favorite was the rose bowl one and the boomtown classic. Your voice seemed a little far away but overall good job.
ReplyDeleteOrganization: 4 Content: 4 Verbal techniques: 3 Media: 4 Preparation: 4
Nice Job Jake. I liked all the pictures of the pieces you wrote. Your seemed to be very quiet and you seemed shy. If I were to grade your project, I would give you a 3 average.
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ReplyDeleteI thought that your memoir did a great job on letting us get a preview of what your life looks like. Nice work keeping your presentation under five minutes but I thought that your voice could have had some more emotion. Also, towards the end your voice thread, your voice sounded more choppy. I think it was because you had recorded some of your sentences differently. The only thing I would add in would be a reflection piece in order to tie together all your memoirs and leave a lasting impression. I could not figure out what your overall theme was, but other then that nice work!