I really enjoyed all the different stories you told in your memoir! At times your speaking was a little bit choppy, so you might want to consider fixing that. I agree with the above poster, in regards to your theme. I'm not sure how it all tied together, but I think if you had one more slide to conclude everything it would make your memoir really great!
Good Job Nate! I loved your stories and pictures! Your voice was extremely clear and your stories were easy to follow. I liked how it all flowed into one great topic, and how you concluded it. That showed a lot of organization. Overall, your voice thread was great! Good job!
I really enjoyed the voice thread. You were almost flawless. I could easily understand you, and you seemed to have every line down. Your introduction gave lots of background information, and I also liked your conclusion. My only recommendation would be to show more emotion. Towards the end, you seemed a little bored of talking. Overall, great job.
Great job. I appreciated the emotion in your writing and voice, and I enjoyed the stories you shared. The speech seemed somewhat disconnected because it was broken up over the slides, but otherwise, stellar work.
I feel pretty good about my Voice Thread. I feel the same as my peers about the voice-recording. The headphones didn't work for me and I recorded it on my home computer. The recordings were fairly difficult. However, I felt really confident about how it turned out. I felt like I was able to connect the memoirs and overlapping ideas pretty well. I also felt good about the quotes and analysis all being concise and appropriate to the subject.
I think your Voicethread was great. It flowed well for most of the time. Your introduction gave me a good idea. I think that the theme that tied everything together requires a little more thinking to understand, which I thought was good. I also think the number of slides you used was appropriate.
Great job Nate! I really liked your Voice thread because it was very meaningful, instead of just showing everybody your past experiences you went out of your way to teach us a lesson! Great job:)
This is pretty good. I liked your opening and closing remarks. I think each memoir could be tied into the theme a little better. But, yea, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed all the different stories you told in your memoir! At times your speaking was a little bit choppy, so you might want to consider fixing that. I agree with the above poster, in regards to your theme. I'm not sure how it all tied together, but I think if you had one more slide to conclude everything it would make your memoir really great!
ReplyDeleteGood Job Nate! I loved your stories and pictures! Your voice was extremely clear and your stories were easy to follow. I liked how it all flowed into one great topic, and how you concluded it. That showed a lot of organization. Overall, your voice thread was great! Good job!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the voice thread. You were almost flawless. I could easily understand you, and you seemed to have every line down. Your introduction gave lots of background information, and I also liked your conclusion. My only recommendation would be to show more emotion. Towards the end, you seemed a little bored of talking. Overall, great job.
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I appreciated the emotion in your writing and voice, and I enjoyed the stories you shared. The speech seemed somewhat disconnected because it was broken up over the slides, but otherwise, stellar work.
ReplyDeleteI feel pretty good about my Voice Thread. I feel the same as my peers about the voice-recording. The headphones didn't work for me and I recorded it on my home computer. The recordings were fairly difficult. However, I felt really confident about how it turned out. I felt like I was able to connect the memoirs and overlapping ideas pretty well. I also felt good about the quotes and analysis all being concise and appropriate to the subject.
ReplyDeleteI think your Voicethread was great. It flowed well for most of the time. Your introduction gave me a good idea. I think that the theme that tied everything together requires a little more thinking to understand, which I thought was good. I also think the number of slides you used was appropriate.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Nate! I really liked your Voice thread because it was very meaningful, instead of just showing everybody your past experiences you went out of your way to teach us a lesson! Great job:)
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