I really like the attention getter. It was very funny and really connected to the rest of your presentation.
Way to go strong without any notecards! I never caught any thinking words and you did a great job keeping your speech flowing!
Elise, I enjoyed how you employed comedy into your speech. You did a very good job at emphasizing connections. My only suggestion would be to talk a little slower and calm down.
I really liked that you had it memorized, you did great! And you made great eye contact with the audience
Elise,You had a great speech. I thought your visuals were really effective in getting your point across.
I liked how you used stories throughout your speech- it made your speech more interesting and personal.
You had a great mood throughout the whole presentation and it was well rehearsed. I liked how it was connected to teenagers, and how stories related to you.
I love your stories. And your presentation flows really well between ideas. You did great!
Elise,I loved your topic!! You did such a good job making eye contact. Your talk was so intriguing and you seemed very passionate! Good job!!!!
Elise, your topic was great and your did a great job by memorizing the speech really well.
Elise, I really enjoyed your speech and the concept behind. It is very true. I loved how you did not use note cards. I feel that would've made my own speech better. You did awesome and I was very impressed with your composure and confidence under the camera!
Elise,I noticed there were a few times when you would pause, but that's much better than having you say, "umm." I enjoyed the beginning story, it helped you connect to the audience.
I loved how you started off with a personal story that was funny, it was very engaging. I also really liked the emotion in your speech. You handled your pauses really well and overall, it was a really good speech.
I liked that you centered in on the older generation, I found it really interesting!
Elise, I liked your ability to shake off your struggles and continue without letting it shake you up. I think that's something that is very hard to do. I also think your attention getter was very interesting and humorous.
It was really clear how much time and effort you put into this and it was really good that your speech was memorized.
Elise, I enjoyed your speech. It was wise to take time to look back at your notes rather than sitting up their stumbling for the words. You also had very good eye contact with the rest of the audience. You were easy to connect to based on the eye contact you established early.
Elise, You did a great job! I could tell you were a little nervous but I admire the way you handled it.
The passion really showed through your talk. The connections back to you and your experiences made it very easy to listen to and made it easier to understand.
Elise, I like how you related your speech to a personal experience. It made the speech seem more personal.
It is a great idea I feel that it will work very well if implemented. You did good keeping it together.
Elise! I really enjoyed your TED talk and I totally agreed about your point that we can learn through personal stories and I wish some of our history teachers would teach that way. You did an amazing job and handled yourself very well.
Elise, I loved the story at the beginning of your Ted Talk. You made your speech very personal to you! I was able to easily connect to it.