Really great eye contact, visuals, and you incorporated a lot of good similes and metaphors into your presentation
Goldy, I liked how you used analogies to show what life is like and how it will never be perfect.
Steven- You make this topic incredibly serious. You use this seriousness to reflect the importance of the topic, and how we must change. You did an excellent job.
I enjoyed that you connected your speech to yourself at te beginning. It engaged me right away and made me want to listen because I knew how you felt and wanted to see how you have changed.
Steven, your presentation is fantastic!!! Everything you said made me think about what I do in my life and I now realize that I'm probably going to change things.
You had a great topic and did a great job memorizing your topic. Good job pausing.
Goldy,Your attention getter really grabbed my attention. I loved how your visuals represented what you were saying.
Goldy, I liked the message about being your own self, I found it really influential. I also like how you connected it to internal motivation! Good job!
Steven, I liked the message about not being so dependent on other peoples judgments!
Goldy- I really liked how you connected life and roller coasters. You maintained really good eye contact and your visuals illustrated your ideas really well.
Goldy, I like how you started your talk off with a lot of seriousness. Your points were very true and applied to my life. Your visuals enhanced the words you said in your speech.
Goldy,Your visuals matched nicely with what you were saying. Even when you froze, you kept you cool and you didn't freak out. You message was connected nicely to yourself.
Loved your use of visuals, they really helped enhance your presentation. Also, way to embrace your pauses instead of making them awkward.
Goldy,I like how you remained serious throughout your speech. Way to keep your cool when you forgot what to say.
Great job. Your speech seemed very action-based, focusing mostly on the "how" of your topic and providing insight to your audience.
Goldy, I loved your attention getter with your brother! The example with baseball was awesome but my favorite part was the roller coaster comparison to life. It was passionate, heartfelt, and awesome!
Steven, I really enjoyed your topic and how you talked about resilience, and being able to deal with the ups and downs. I really felt like it connected to my life
Steven, I really liked you story about your brother and how he motivated you but he couldn't motivate you to try your best. Only you could. I completely agree with this and I like this idea.
Steven! That was really powerful! You seemed to embrace your topic really well. It made a personal impact, especially what you said about other people impacting our decision making
When you related life to a roller coaster it made me think that life really is like that. Your presentation really spoke to me and made it connect well. Good Job!
The serious tone you gave to your presentation gave it a more important feeling.
I liked how you talked about starting defining yourself today, instead of waiting. Also the part where you talked about keeping going came right after you paused a little, and it fit. Good job.
Steven,Nice Job! Your topic was very good and you knew it well. You were very assertive and I can tell you had it memorized! Good eye contact.