Erina,Way to use a personal story to help connect the audience to your speech. Sometimes, I am shy in classes in which I don't know the students or the teacher. I also enjoyed how you used known figures to support your topic. Way to go.
Erina, good job on talking about personal experience! Good speech!
Erina,Great topic. I enjoyed your visuals. Good job relating your topic to the world, and to different famous people.
Erina! I would never know that you were shy. Your speaking voice was fluid and you seemed super confident. Awesome job.
Erina, great topic and real world connections. Awesome memorization and good visuals. Nice job!
Your modern day example of JK Rowling made it really stand out and make your presentation great. Way to get through the stuff spots and keep going.
Erina- I enjoyed how you used personal stories to your enhance topic. The speech was engaging and made me think of my own life.
Erina, your subject was great. I think it really applies to this final! Your Ted Talk was empowering. I enjoyed your slides.
Erina, I like how you compared your idea to real life ideas of famous people. Any time someone sees a famous person it is a lot more motivating that just a regular person so I think you did a very good job with this.
Erina, I like how you made your presentation personal. You had good visuals to accompany what you were presenting.
Erina, I liked your start, it made it really easy to connect to your ideas. I also loved how you found your voice and did a very inspiring TED talk.
I liked your personal connection right away, and how you narrowed down the people in the world to the tiny amount who actually made an impact.
Your presentation was very well done. You did a great job the thought you put into it was evident.
Erina, I really liked your topic, and I know I 've been there too. Great presentation!
Erina, I like your topic, the examples you used with specific people that failed over and over again but ended up ultimatly succeeding. You spoke clearly and I enjoyed listening to you speak.
Excellent work presenting your speech. You appeared confident and enthusiastic and projected your voice well.
Erina,Your speech was great! I loved how you put yourself into the talk! You made valid points and your visuals were very good! I also liked your TED wish! Nice job!
Great topic and great speaking skills!