Your talk was so emotional and personal, my heart was broken. I really loved how you talked about the survival part.
The whole thing was beautiful. I liked the parts where you rhymed, it really added emphasis. Great message!
Wow, your emotion was clearly evident. I liked how you turned the presentation around halfway through. Very incouraging
That was amazing and touching, although I didn't personally connect with it, I really felt it. You did a great job.
Great job connecting with the audience through your story and the story of your friend. Good job with the metaphors, help connect with people on a third level. I can tell you're passionate about this, good job
The metaphors you used were amazingly powerful and it was so powerful how you connected the pain to physical things like war. It was so easy to connect to and relate to
The way you worded things really made a huge impact on your speech. I know a lot of people who are going through some of the stuff your friend went through. I wish they could listen to your speech to realize that they aren't alone. You did really well(:
You started with a personal story, and it was powerful. It's hard to tell stories like that.But, then, you turned your speech into something so positive! It was a good transition. And it was a good message. Good job.
The point you made that we never hear the stories of survival really struck a chord with me. Your presentation was very poetic, and I can't tell you how meaningful it was to hear you talk about it because your passion was so obvious. What an amazing speech!
Your personal story is quite powerful and the way you present your ideas is moving.
Your language was BEAUTIFUL. The imagery, symbolism, and fluidity of your words was both heartbreaking and wonderful.
Erica, your speech was extremely powerful. Sharing your insecurities with the class was inspirational and I am glad you spoke about this subject. You made a change in the world, and I congratulate you! Great job!!!
Your use of your own story really added to your speech. I'm glad you had the courage to talk about your own story. You opened yourself up and became vulnerable, and it really payed off. Your speech was great.
Your topic was extremely personal and was easily felt. The emotional stories were very effective! Good job!
This is a very powerful Ted topic that connects to pretty much everyone in here. You did a really good job! You're a great speaker and writer.
Erica,Caring people can save people's lives. Your presentation was very heartfelt and I like that. You were confident up there, wonderful presentation.
Erica, your ted talk was very good. Your personal story really helped exemplify your topic.
The vulnerability in your speech was incredible! I would have never known about your past looking at you now. You have always struck me as someone who is so confident and beautiful. I loved your speech and thought you did an awesome job.
I think you really hit home. I could really connect to your speech, and it was really inspiring. Good job!
Wow! That was just great! It really hit an emotional chord with me when you talked about your friend, that must have been really hard.
It was so brave of you to be so personal in your presentation, but that's also what made it so great. I loved your writing, the symbolism was fantastic!
AHH!! YOU DID IT AND DID IT WONDERFULLY!!! I think that your words, as beautiful as they were were really able to reach out to people, especially me. You helped pull me through my hardships.
Dear Erica,I love you. You. did. perfectly. I think we can all relate to your topic and you are so brave for revealing your secrets. You handled it perfectly when you had to think about what to say. Your tone was really good. You did it!!! :)
The topic of your speech is inspiring to keep people motivated to live, and that everyone's life is valuable.