Wow. This was a really interesting topic and I can tell it really meant a lot to you. Good job!
I love how your wish really related to your personal life. It was touching. Good job.
I really liked how you told your story. I learned a lot from your speech. Great job!
Really powerful topic and story! Well done! Great challenge and overall message!
I never knew anything about Marfan's syndrome, the story you told us was really interesting and emotional. I think that it is really cool that you want the medical community should recognize this disease.
I really like how you connected it to your family and made it so personal. Your wish is achievable. Gosh the way you presented that I could see you being a scientist! Great Job, William :). I feel motivated!
I like how you're speech was about bringing awareness to this seemingly invisible disease, I really liked your presentation!
Great job, you made a lot of personal connections that helped me see the power in your speech.
Very cool Max. I was touched by the story of your uncle, I understand that this is something that is near and dear to you. I plan to research. Very good job. Articulate and eloquent, you got your point across in a subtle but powerful way. Excellent speech
I like that you had such a unique topic. It wasn't cliche but it spread awareness to something that you have a connection with. It was very informative and I appreciate you doing this speech. I will definitely be doing some research. Great job, Max :)
Your speech was so powerful and inspiring. Your speaking voice and pauses were very effective along with the facts and statistics. Really great job!
I never new about Marfan! I agree that diseases like this deserve to be treated better and I thought it was really great how you encouraged us to all research it! Great job!
Max, you did a fantastic job. I loved your speech and that you connected your speech to your uncle. Thank you for sharing with the class! Great job!
It was so cool how you brought a dangerous disease to our awareness, and the personal connection was so powerful and made it even more moving
I was so shocked when you revealed that the story was about your uncle. The personal connection made your speech so powerful. You did a lot of research and I call tell you felt strongly about the topic. You did fantastic.
The topic of your talk was so original and personally connected that I really feel like I must go out and research like you challenged us to.
I have never even heard of Marfan before! Your presentation was eye opening. Good job!
This was very interesting. The story was really powerful and touching. I've never heard about Marfan's Syndrome, and I agree that diseases like that should be better researched. Good job!
I like the personal connection you have to Marfan Syndrome, and how much it added to your talk. You made me much more interested in the disease.
I have never heard of Marfan's syndrome. Very cool way to bring it to our attention. Well done
The personal example was a very good one, nice job bringing attention to something that is important, but few know of.