Rachel, I loved the story you told about the old man you met, I found it really inspiring and interesting! Great job!
Rachel,Was that picture of the city drawn by you? I liked your personal story and how your topic and theme revolved around the one story you told.
Good message, and I liked your visuals
I really loved how you used a personal experience. I also liked how you connected this to all of our lives!
Great job with your visuals and your speaking was really fluid and didn't sound scripted like you've practiced a ton.
I appreciated your message to be spontaneous and learn from children.
Rachel,I enjoyed looking at the drawings that you had done, they added to your presentation. I think you had a good message for teenagers. You did good with eye contact, but it would have been better if your speech was memorized.
Rachel, I liked your story about when you were talking to the homeless man because it was very interesting.
Your story of the homeless man really made me feel emotion. It made me feel that your life has been changed by that man. Your message to be unexpected made me want to change.
Rachel, I liked how you compared teenagers to lights, and that we would light upp the world. It was very creative.
Rachel- I liked how you ended your speech, you were very clear and easy to understand.
Good job! I didn't get to see it but I heard it went well!
I loved all of the hand drawn pictures