Jacob,You had a really great speech; however, it would have been better if you had the speech more memorized so that you could make more eye contact with your audience.
Jacob, You had great detail in your speech, but it would have been better if you didn't read most of your speech straight off of your piece of paper.
I really liked the clarity that you spoke with and the message you conveyed to your audience
I liked your personal connection and all of your famous quotes. Some of your visuals confused me but overall good job.
Your use of quotes was very effective in your speaking. It really made yor speaking stronger.
I really liked your personal stories, they made me connect with you talk that much more. Your visuals also enhanced your presentation and made it more interesting to watch.
Jacob, I liked how you brought in the personal story about you differing from your dad. I thought it was a very good example. Great job!
Jacob, Your speech was very powerful. I like how you related to the civil rights movement. Good job!
Your speech was great, and it connects to a lot of what I'm talking about. I like the part about being you, not just identified by someone else.
Jacob- Both your speech and your idea were very straight forward and good, but it would have been better if you had it more memorized so you could make more eye contact.
Jacob you had a very inspirational speech. The only thing I recommend for you to do next time is to memorize your speech instead of reading off of the paper. I enjoyed your examples and quotes from Mark Twain and Martin Luther King.
Your ending was fantastic!
Jacob, Great ideas. I like how you tied it in to yourself. I would recommend having the speech memorized so that you wouldn't need the speech in front of you.
Jacob, I really enjoyed the message in your speech, the personal stories were really effective in enhancing your message
Jacob, I enjoyed your speech on individuality, but I would have enjoyed it more if it was memorized. I also noticed some of your slides didn't match up at the same time that you were talking.
Jacob, I liked how you incorporated personal stories into your speech. You made me think about would I be a follower or a leader.
Jacob, your speech was very interesting to listen to. I would next time just have notes or an outline rather than having a copy of your speech. Having just notes would have allowed you to make better eye contact.
Props to you for going first! Your voice projection was great. The topic of individuality is very powerful and you had great connections to yourself. It would have been great if you did have more eye contact.
Jacob! I really enjoyed your TED talk. You seemed really passionate about your subject and it really shined through.
Jacob, I really liked your message but it would have been more effective if you had had it more memorized.
Jacob, I like how much your speech reflected on what we see in society today, especially in highschool.
Jacob, I was able to connect with what you said about not feeling like you could be an individual.
Jacob, your speech was very connective. I thought you pulling in the example of racism was extremely smart because you truly put your points into perspective. Furthermore, the racism example was something that still has impact today. You did a wonderful job!