Alex, I love your personal stories. I really connected with your topic of don't let the fear of failure. I think failure is a very strong motivator and we all have to stop worrying about failure.
Alex, I really enjoyed your personal story about soccer, and how you connected it to your topic. Your last visual was also very powerful in concluding your speech
Alex, you choose a very controversial topic. You did an excellent job at explaining your viewpoint on why Obama is not reflecting America's pride. Also, I enjoyed how you connected the topic of not fearing failure to your everyday life and soccer. My only recommendation is not to look at your note card.
I enjoyed your speech and when presenting you did not show any fear of failure! That is awesome. I would recoomend using more quotes that Obama has said so that you have proof that he does this! I liked all the different personal examples that you used! They enhanced your speech a ton.
I really liked your personal story that you incorporated into it, and the memorization was great
ReplyDeleteAlex,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your wide variety of visuals. Also, good job keeping eye contact with the audience throughout your speech.
I really like the part about not fearing failure. I can see it a lot in my life and it's especially there in sports.
ReplyDeleteI love your topic. The challenge at the end helped me realize what I need to do in my TED talk, and it really completed your presentation.
ReplyDeleteAlex,
ReplyDeleteIt was smart to use you iphone instead of a piece of paper. I liked your challenge, your story makes me want to embrace the challenges.
Alex, I love your personal stories. I really connected with your topic of don't let the fear of failure. I think failure is a very strong motivator and we all have to stop worrying about failure.
ReplyDeleteAlex, I really enjoyed your personal story about soccer, and how you connected it to your topic. Your last visual was also very powerful in concluding your speech
ReplyDeleteAlex, you choose a very controversial topic. You did an excellent job at explaining your viewpoint on why Obama is not reflecting America's pride. Also, I enjoyed how you connected the topic of not fearing failure to your everyday life and soccer. My only recommendation is not to look at your note card.
ReplyDeleteAlex, I thought your TED wish was really inspiring, and I loved the visuals that you had!
ReplyDeleteAlex, I think the message you sent out was very inspiring and you did great with your presentation.
ReplyDeleteI loved your message about failure being on the way to success.
ReplyDeleteI liked your personal connection a lot and your visuals were engaging. You did a great job
ReplyDeleteAlex,
ReplyDeleteYour speech was so inspiring! I liked how you used your personal story about soccer! Nice job!
Alex, I liked how you related your speech to a specific memory. It made your speech seem more relatable and personal.
ReplyDeleteAlex, I think you did a really good job. I really like how you said we could put your message into action.
ReplyDeleteYour topic really spoke to me about failure. Relating back to this project made it better to relate to your audience.
ReplyDeleteAlex- you maintained really good eye contact throughout your speech and your visuals fit your ideas really well
ReplyDeleteAlex!
ReplyDeleteThe emotion you put into your talk was really inspiring. I enjoyed that part of your talk.
Alex, using a personal story helped you connect with audience and helped draw them in into your speech. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your speech and when presenting you did not show any fear of failure! That is awesome. I would recoomend using more quotes that Obama has said so that you have proof that he does this! I liked all the different personal examples that you used! They enhanced your speech a ton.
ReplyDeleteThe way you spoke to the audience was really effective and sounded like you were comfortable up there.
ReplyDeleteAlex, I love how you connected sports. You pulled in your own experiences which made me really see how impactful your talk's themes were.
ReplyDelete