Very common theme, very excellent display of it. Despite hearing this kind of thing many times before, you made me think about it more. You brought new light to a topic often left in the shade. Excellent passion, great speech. Great Job
I really liked your direct approach to the matter, the powerful stance of how this isn't going to happen anymore. I thought it was really cool how yours and Julia's tied together. I really agree with your three different people, you did a great job.
Riley, Things on the internet are stuck there forever even bullying. Cyber bullying is harsh because some people go online to get away, just to be harassed. This was a great topic to talk about. Wonderful job!
You sounded very knowledgeable in your topic and it made it more meaningful. You had such an important topic and the presentation really added to that.
This is a common topic, but you added a new twist to it. Very, very nice. You shifted on your feet a little as well- remember that everyone here is happy that you're getting up there.
I could really tell you were passionate about your topic and I thought your topic was great. Too many people are bullied and I have really thought about myself and how I am usually a bystander.
Riley, The power in your voice drew me in immediately. I was unaware of the statistics you conveyed, and they were very eye-opening. I agree that the bystander must stand up and put a stop to the bully.
You facts really prove your point. I love how your emotion is poured into this. I can tell it means a lot to you. Great points! Geez! You should be a motivational speaker :). You really made me think. AMAZING JOB! You created a plan that is achievable: I love it.
One word: Perfect. Your statistics were so powerful. I loved how you provided steps on how to solve the problem. You were really emotional and it really got me thinking. Suicide is such a horrifying problem and I wish more people thought the way that you did. Thank you for getting everything thinking about this topic!
Your message was really good however I felt that you spoke really fast. I think your talk could have been heavier had you spoken slower, other than that it was great.
You did a great job of presenting. You were articulate, and conveyed emotion really well! I like how you showed pictures of the innocent kids who took their own lives, that helped make your argument all the more powerful!
Your topic is a very important problem, and I'm glad you addressed it. Great job, especially when you recovered after forgetting what you were going to say. Well done.
You took from your own personal experience about cyber bullying. It made your speech more powerful.
ReplyDeleteVery common theme, very excellent display of it. Despite hearing this kind of thing many times before, you made me think about it more. You brought new light to a topic often left in the shade. Excellent passion, great speech. Great Job
ReplyDeleteI can tell that you are passionate about what you are talking about. It was really enlighting to hear all the facts surrounding bullying. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your direct approach to the matter, the powerful stance of how this isn't going to happen anymore. I thought it was really cool how yours and Julia's tied together. I really agree with your three different people, you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteWhat you said was very true and so relevant to us all! I hope too that we can stop bullying and improve our world.
ReplyDeleteRiley,
ReplyDeleteThings on the internet are stuck there forever even bullying. Cyber bullying is harsh because some people go online to get away, just to be harassed. This was a great topic to talk about. Wonderful job!
You sounded very knowledgeable in your topic and it made it more meaningful. You had such an important topic and the presentation really added to that.
ReplyDeleteThis is a common topic, but you added a new twist to it. Very, very nice. You shifted on your feet a little as well- remember that everyone here is happy that you're getting up there.
ReplyDeleteI like how you presented a solution to the problem of bullying. Great presentation and presentation style.
ReplyDeleteI could really tell you were passionate about your topic and I thought your topic was great. Too many people are bullied and I have really thought about myself and how I am usually a bystander.
ReplyDeleteThis is an extremely important and relatable topic to society today. I could really hear the passion in your voice! Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou connected really well with the audience. Really good job.
ReplyDeleteRiley,
ReplyDeleteThe power in your voice drew me in immediately. I was unaware of the statistics you conveyed, and they were very eye-opening. I agree that the bystander must stand up and put a stop to the bully.
You facts really prove your point. I love how your emotion is poured into this. I can tell it means a lot to you. Great points! Geez! You should be a motivational speaker :). You really made me think. AMAZING JOB! You created a plan that is achievable: I love it.
ReplyDeleteYou hardly ever looked at your presentation and looked very professional. The facts were very powerful, and your emotion was clearly evident.
ReplyDeleteRiley you did great! You spoke powerful words and affected the whole classroom. I really liked what you had to say! Good job Riley!
ReplyDeleteGood job! The statistics were scary, and that really helped support your message.
ReplyDeleteThe idea that you presented was so potent and so prevalent. The topic was a great idea to present to people like us.
ReplyDeleteOne word: Perfect. Your statistics were so powerful. I loved how you provided steps on how to solve the problem. You were really emotional and it really got me thinking. Suicide is such a horrifying problem and I wish more people thought the way that you did. Thank you for getting everything thinking about this topic!
ReplyDeleteGreat job, I loved the bystander affect that you explained. That really opened my eyes.
ReplyDeleteYour message was really good however I felt that you spoke really fast. I think your talk could have been heavier had you spoken slower, other than that it was great.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of presenting. You were articulate, and conveyed emotion really well! I like how you showed pictures of the innocent kids who took their own lives, that helped make your argument all the more powerful!
ReplyDeleteYour topic is a very important problem, and I'm glad you addressed it. Great job, especially when you recovered after forgetting what you were going to say. Well done.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was so relatable. The specific steps to achieve your wish and goal in the end were really effective!
ReplyDeleteRiley, that was a moving speech. The call to action on standing up to bullying was inspiring. A relevant issue with a way to prevent and stop it.
ReplyDeleteYour speech was so moving and I really want to stand up for bullying even more. It was also very relatable
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