This is a very original idea. Good job incorporating something familiar to your audience, Dan Pink's talk on what drives people. You included the audience well, directing you speech at each individual. Good job
You kept going back and forth between your points and Pink's points, which was cool. You made your speech relatable and interesting. And....you have a picture of Neuschwanstein!!!
Taylor, I like that you mentioned that as kids we already have the qualities of success. After all, it is the world that teaches us to be self conscious and to please others rather than build ourselves up.
Nice job connecting your talk to what we just learned about (Drive). I also like how you reflected on your own past, and sort of showed the evolution of your motivations.
I like the idea of becoming a child again. It really connects with many teens, as I feel like most of us would really like to go back to childhood rather than having a finals week. Great talk.
Taylorrrrrr- you were so fantastic. You appeared very confident and well prepared. You made the audience laugh and it brought a big feeling of nostalgia for me. I wish I could become a kid again, it's so hard when life and school force you to grow up! I like how you related it back to Pink's video. Thank you for the great advice :)
Geez, Taylor I think that you are the PERFECT person to give this speech. Your sweet attitude really adds emphasis to your point. You made me so happy watching you. Great child-like examples are amazing. You did it! SPECTACULAR!
I like how you connected a little personal story to almost everything. I like how you provided us ways with ways to distress, it made your talk much more personal. Good job :)
You did wonderful. Your talk was so fun. Throughout your whole speech I wanted nothing more than to be a kid again. I loved how you included yourself in your speech. Great job.
I liked your introduction and how you explained why you chose your topic. You said a lot of meaningful things that most of us can relate to, and that was really effective and interesting!
Taylor, It is hard to envision the future, especially for kids. My future has changed too. Your speech was wonderful because it was very positive and joyous. You were confident up there and that's great!
I really enjoyed hearing another view of how to become our est selves. Your points were right in and very true!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very original idea. Good job incorporating something familiar to your audience, Dan Pink's talk on what drives people. You included the audience well, directing you speech at each individual. Good job
ReplyDeleteIt was cool how you related your talk to Dan Pinks video and book, and it made it really easy to follow. It was also honest and personal.
ReplyDeleteYou kept going back and forth between your points and Pink's points, which was cool. You made your speech relatable and interesting.
ReplyDeleteAnd....you have a picture of Neuschwanstein!!!
Your speech was organized really well and it continued to build, so good job with that! I can really relate to what you said(:
ReplyDeleteTaylor,
ReplyDeleteI like that you mentioned that as kids we already have the qualities of success. After all, it is the world that teaches us to be self conscious and to please others rather than build ourselves up.
I am a five year old on the inside... so i greatly connected with your speech. Great job.
ReplyDeleteYour talk was very personal and relaxed and it made it easier for me to listen to what you were saying. Your idea was very original and creative!
ReplyDeleteGood job Taylor! You made a great point and it was very creative! Your speech made a lot of sense and put a lot of impact on the class! Great job!!
ReplyDeleteNice job connecting your talk to what we just learned about (Drive). I also like how you reflected on your own past, and sort of showed the evolution of your motivations.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of becoming a child again. It really connects with many teens, as I feel like most of us would really like to go back to childhood rather than having a finals week. Great talk.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your TED Wish. You had a great presentation style and were very confident during the entire talk.
ReplyDeleteThis topic is extremely relatable to me, especially during finals! Finding the meaning you had when you were little is a great topic! Good job!
ReplyDeleteTaylorrrrrr- you were so fantastic. You appeared very confident and well prepared. You made the audience laugh and it brought a big feeling of nostalgia for me. I wish I could become a kid again, it's so hard when life and school force you to grow up! I like how you related it back to Pink's video. Thank you for the great advice :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful idea and Ted talk. You're very confident! Great job!
ReplyDeleteGeez, Taylor I think that you are the PERFECT person to give this speech. Your sweet attitude really adds emphasis to your point. You made me so happy watching you. Great child-like examples are amazing. You did it! SPECTACULAR!
ReplyDeleteI liked your topic! It really got me thinking that we have lost our youth, great job.
ReplyDeleteI like how you connected a little personal story to almost everything. I like how you provided us ways with ways to distress, it made your talk much more personal. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteYou did wonderful. Your talk was so fun. Throughout your whole speech I wanted nothing more than to be a kid again. I loved how you included yourself in your speech. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI liked your introduction and how you explained why you chose your topic. You said a lot of meaningful things that most of us can relate to, and that was really effective and interesting!
ReplyDeleteTaylor,
ReplyDeleteIt is hard to envision the future, especially for kids. My future has changed too. Your speech was wonderful because it was very positive and joyous. You were confident up there and that's great!
The fact that you used what we spoke about in class and yet related it to such primary idea was great.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Your speech inspired me to take time to be a kid again. You made Dan Pink's video more applicable, at least for me.
ReplyDeleteTrue, childhood exemplifies many qualities we later look back on and try to get them back later in life.
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