This is a topic that is always talked about, but you made it so much easier to understand. You have it a new twist and all of your examples are great!!
Haleigh, I loved the example you gave about the Faith Hill smile. That was a great idea to use that and it really made your speech a lot better! I loved your speech!
Haleigh, your topic is something that a lot of people try to tackle, but the way you took it on was incredible. Your examples were extremely impactful. You did amazing.
Haleigh- Your speech had a lot of key points reflecting individuality and courage. You seemed to be stumbling on a bit of your speech but overall you did a great job.
Haleigh, You were very clear when you spoke. The one time you forgot what to say, instead of stumbling with um's, you took time to remember what you needed to say.
This is a topic that is always talked about, but you made it so much easier to understand. You have it a new twist and all of your examples are great!!
ReplyDeleteHaleigh- You spoke very clearly and had good memorization. Your topic was very real and inspiring.
ReplyDeleteHaleigh, I loved the example you gave about the Faith Hill smile. That was a great idea to use that and it really made your speech a lot better! I loved your speech!
ReplyDeleteHaleigh,
ReplyDeleteI'm happy that when you froze sometimes, you didn't panic, but laughed at yourself. The message you gave was really moving.
Haleigh, I liked how you used the magazine cover of Faith Hill, it really proved your point! Great presentation!
ReplyDeleteYour message was very true and was very inspiring.
ReplyDeleteHaleigh,
ReplyDeleteLoved your speech and all the comparisons that were in your speech, and you handled all your pauses really well.
Haleigh,
ReplyDeleteGreat job keeping eye contact with the audience.
Haleigh, Your topic was great and i really liked your TED challenge. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteHaleigh, your topic is something that a lot of people try to tackle, but the way you took it on was incredible. Your examples were extremely impactful. You did amazing.
ReplyDeleteGood eye contact with the audience, and I am glad you were able to continue through forgetting lines and make it a great presentation
ReplyDeleteHaleigh,
ReplyDeleteYour speech was so good! You used great examples and made me want to change my outlook on individuality! Nice job!
Way to power through the technical difficulties. Your topic was well thought out and heart felt
ReplyDeleteHaleigh the thing about changing your label was super powerful to hear.
ReplyDeleteHaleigh- Your speech had a lot of key points reflecting individuality and courage. You seemed to be stumbling on a bit of your speech but overall you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteHaleigh,
ReplyDeleteYou were very clear when you spoke. The one time you forgot what to say, instead of stumbling with um's, you took time to remember what you needed to say.
Haleigh, I liked how your speech related to highschool. Everybody labels other people, so I felt that it made your speech more personal.
ReplyDeleteHaleigh,
ReplyDeleteThis was such a great TED talk. You handled a serious subject very well.
The visuals really helped your speech. You really controlled your pauses and made it work.
ReplyDeleteI loved it. The topic of your speech was really interesting, and your pictures perfectly complimented it. The change your label part was great.
ReplyDeleteI liked your comparisons because we need to be different from everyone else.
ReplyDeleteHaleigh,
ReplyDeleteThe presence you brought with you got my attention and encouraged me to listen to what you had to say.