I never knew anything about Marfan's syndrome, the story you told us was really interesting and emotional. I think that it is really cool that you want the medical community should recognize this disease.
I really like how you connected it to your family and made it so personal. Your wish is achievable. Gosh the way you presented that I could see you being a scientist! Great Job, William :). I feel motivated!
Very cool Max. I was touched by the story of your uncle, I understand that this is something that is near and dear to you. I plan to research. Very good job. Articulate and eloquent, you got your point across in a subtle but powerful way. Excellent speech
I like that you had such a unique topic. It wasn't cliche but it spread awareness to something that you have a connection with. It was very informative and I appreciate you doing this speech. I will definitely be doing some research. Great job, Max :)
I never new about Marfan! I agree that diseases like this deserve to be treated better and I thought it was really great how you encouraged us to all research it! Great job!
I was so shocked when you revealed that the story was about your uncle. The personal connection made your speech so powerful. You did a lot of research and I call tell you felt strongly about the topic. You did fantastic.
This was very interesting. The story was really powerful and touching. I've never heard about Marfan's Syndrome, and I agree that diseases like that should be better researched. Good job!
Wow. This was a really interesting topic and I can tell it really meant a lot to you. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI love how your wish really related to your personal life. It was touching. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you told your story. I learned a lot from your speech. Great job!
ReplyDeleteReally powerful topic and story! Well done! Great challenge and overall message!
ReplyDeleteI never knew anything about Marfan's syndrome, the story you told us was really interesting and emotional. I think that it is really cool that you want the medical community should recognize this disease.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you connected it to your family and made it so personal. Your wish is achievable. Gosh the way you presented that I could see you being a scientist! Great Job, William :). I feel motivated!
ReplyDeleteI like how you're speech was about bringing awareness to this seemingly invisible disease, I really liked your presentation!
ReplyDeleteGreat job, you made a lot of personal connections that helped me see the power in your speech.
ReplyDeleteVery cool Max. I was touched by the story of your uncle, I understand that this is something that is near and dear to you. I plan to research. Very good job. Articulate and eloquent, you got your point across in a subtle but powerful way. Excellent speech
ReplyDeleteI like that you had such a unique topic. It wasn't cliche but it spread awareness to something that you have a connection with. It was very informative and I appreciate you doing this speech. I will definitely be doing some research. Great job, Max :)
ReplyDeleteYour speech was so powerful and inspiring. Your speaking voice and pauses were very effective along with the facts and statistics. Really great job!
ReplyDeleteI never new about Marfan! I agree that diseases like this deserve to be treated better and I thought it was really great how you encouraged us to all research it! Great job!
ReplyDeleteMax, you did a fantastic job. I loved your speech and that you connected your speech to your uncle. Thank you for sharing with the class! Great job!
ReplyDeleteIt was so cool how you brought a dangerous disease to our awareness, and the personal connection was so powerful and made it even more moving
ReplyDeleteI was so shocked when you revealed that the story was about your uncle. The personal connection made your speech so powerful. You did a lot of research and I call tell you felt strongly about the topic. You did fantastic.
ReplyDeleteThe topic of your talk was so original and personally connected that I really feel like I must go out and research like you challenged us to.
ReplyDeleteI have never even heard of Marfan before! Your presentation was eye opening. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis was very interesting. The story was really powerful and touching. I've never heard about Marfan's Syndrome, and I agree that diseases like that should be better researched. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like the personal connection you have to Marfan Syndrome, and how much it added to your talk. You made me much more interested in the disease.
ReplyDeleteI have never heard of Marfan's syndrome. Very cool way to bring it to our attention. Well done
ReplyDeleteThe personal example was a very good one, nice job bringing attention to something that is important, but few know of.
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