Giovanna, Great topic! It was a topic that we could all connect with because most all of us did pretend to be pirates and other things. Good composure.
Giovanna, I like how you incorporated the importance of imagination in the future into your speech. I also enjoyed how you had some humor in your talk.
Giovanna, I could tell that you were nervous, but you didn't let that nervousness control your speech. Some of the points you brought up made me laugh, especially when it was related to schools.
I liked the thoughts you had behind your speech as well as the personal message you had behind it. However I wish the words or phrases "you know" and "like" would've not been used because those words somewhat mask the great topic you chose to speak about! Also don't say what the next thing you are going to speak about but instead make the transition flow better. I love the humour though because it enhanced your speech. Great job!!
Good job using a little bit of humor in your talk. You had a good topic.
ReplyDeleteGiovanna,
ReplyDeleteGreat topic! It was a topic that we could all connect with because most all of us did pretend to be pirates and other things. Good composure.
Giovanna,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your visuals. Also, I think your topic was great. Great job!!!!
Giovanna, good job! Your idea was really well thought out.
ReplyDeleteNice visuals on your slideshow. Good job!
ReplyDeleteGiovanna- My only recommendation would be to stop using the "Like and Ums". You had an excellent topic and greatly influenced me.
ReplyDeleteGiovanna, you are so strong! You remained bubbly and involved throughout your presentation. I think we all need a little more imagination!
ReplyDeleteGiovanna, I liked how you related the example about fun teacher to our lives in highschool.
ReplyDeleteGood job keeping it together and putting your own spin on your own words. You did good with your organization and visuals were creative.
ReplyDeleteGiovanna, I like how you incorporated the importance of imagination in the future into your speech. I also enjoyed how you had some humor in your talk.
ReplyDeleteGiovanna,
ReplyDeleteWay to add humor into your speech, that always makes it more fun to listen to. Also, I really liked your idea... it was so true.
Giovanna,
ReplyDeleteI could tell that you were nervous, but you didn't let that nervousness control your speech. Some of the points you brought up made me laugh, especially when it was related to schools.
Giovanna, I liked how you incorporated your idea into the workplace, school, and in the future.
ReplyDeleteGiovanna,
ReplyDeleteGood job! I like how you incorporated the topic of imagination into work, school, and the world. It made want to be more imaginative!
You had a lot of confidence and enthusiasm for your topic while presenting your speech, which made it very captivating.
ReplyDeleteI liked the thoughts you had behind your speech as well as the personal message you had behind it. However I wish the words or phrases "you know" and "like" would've not been used because those words somewhat mask the great topic you chose to speak about! Also don't say what the next thing you are going to speak about but instead make the transition flow better. I love the humour though because it enhanced your speech. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteI liked the imagination images and the pirates idea. I planned pirates and cowboys with my brother for years.
ReplyDeleteI liked your connections to teachers, because we can all relate. I also liked how you to us embrace imagination, and not just take it for granted.
ReplyDeleteJust for next time, I would repeat why we should embrace imagination so it leaves a lasting impression.
ReplyDeleteI feel that your message was very important and can really change how people think and how the world will change around us.
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