Aly, It's hard to type with one hand because I'm using the other to put ice on my knee. Good job involving the audience in your speech. Also, great job making the speech very personal.
Aly D, You did a good job of including the audience in your presentation. It was good that your topic was connected to you personally. It was also very educational.
That was amazing! The ice idea was such a good idea!!! You could tell you really knew what you were talking about, and you used good visuals! Nice job!
Aly, I love how you did the ice example. It was extremely interactive and gave me great perspective on your injury. I think you are an extremely strong person.
Good job interacting the audience and making it connect back to your wish. You had your speech very well memorized and made eye contact really well throughout.
Aly, your speech was unbelievable. Like honestly it was awesome. I love all the examples and how easily you spoke and that everything flowed together. This was an outstanding example of preperation, mixed with confidence and conviction, which made your speech breathtaking.
The ice activity really added to the presentation, and the video tied it all together. You took a generic topic - injury - and made it into something no one else could have done. Good job!
Aly, I had no idea the pain that you have gone through. The perseverance you have shown to continue to compete is truly inspirational. I enjoyed how you interacted with the audience.
Aly, my knee is really cold. Awesome way to interact with your audience, keep good eye contact, and memorize your lines
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ReplyDeleteIt's hard to type with one hand because I'm using the other to put ice on my knee. Good job involving the audience in your speech. Also, great job making the speech very personal.
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ReplyDeleteThe ice bag was a nice touch. Your personal stories were very touching and over all showed great understand to your subject.
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ReplyDeleteWay to get your audience involved in a unique way. Also way to connect with your speech, I could tell that you really cared.
Aly, I liked your topic; my mom tore her ACL recently and I remember what she had to do to get through it.
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ReplyDeleteYou did a good job of including the audience in your presentation. It was good that your topic was connected to you personally. It was also very educational.
That was amazing! The ice idea was such a good idea!!! You could tell you really knew what you were talking about, and you used good visuals! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the ice activity. It was a neat way to interact with the audience.
ReplyDeleteAly, it was really difficult to keep the ice on my knee but i liked how you involved us in your talk. your talk was fantastic
ReplyDeleteAly, I love how you did the ice example. It was extremely interactive and gave me great perspective on your injury. I think you are an extremely strong person.
ReplyDeleteI liked the your messaging of fighting through the mentally tough times of your life.
ReplyDeleteAly- I love your topic, being an athlete it was very relatable. You also did a very good job with memorization and eye contact
ReplyDeleteGood job interacting the audience and making it connect back to your wish. You had your speech very well memorized and made eye contact really well throughout.
ReplyDeleteAly, your speech was unbelievable. Like honestly it was awesome. I love all the examples and how easily you spoke and that everything flowed together. This was an outstanding example of preperation, mixed with confidence and conviction, which made your speech breathtaking.
ReplyDeleteAly, your passion was obvious, and you are like a natural at speaking. You were so easy to listen to.
ReplyDeleteAly D, Your video was very interesting. I like how you had an object to help you interact with the audience.
ReplyDeleteAly, I liked how you used the ice bags to enhance the effect of your speech.
ReplyDeleteIt was a very interesting topic that was very important to you. The direction it went surprised and engaged me.
ReplyDeleteAly, I can tell you are a very good public speaker. Your speech flowed very nicely and I liked your personal experience comparison.
ReplyDeleteThe ice activity really added to the presentation, and the video tied it all together. You took a generic topic - injury - and made it into something no one else could have done. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAly, I had no idea the pain that you have gone through. The perseverance you have shown to continue to compete is truly inspirational. I enjoyed how you interacted with the audience.
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