Sophie, You did an excellent job connecting your speech to yourself. I enjoyed how you reflected your own personal clumsiness to the key points of your speech. Great Job!
Sophie, Even when you were thinking about what to say, you laughed proving your point. I enjoyed how your speech was positive. Great visuals that matched your speech. Good job.
Your connections to your own life and gymnastics made it a lot easier to see your passion about your topic. I thought your presentation flowed really well, and you really connected to us when you were speaking.
Sophie, I loved your opening slide! The bloopers title was so creative! You had some great points and advice and I can tell you worked hard to write this speech. Good visuals! Nice job.
When you talk about being clumsy and laughing it off, you really made a point from the rest of everyone's topics that you are fearless of what other people think of you. The combination between facts and stories made your
Sophie I can definitely connect with this!!
ReplyDeleteSophie, it is important to all learn to laugh at ourselves. Thank you for this wonderful topic. You kept your cool extrememly well up there.
ReplyDeleteI actually need to learn how to do this, I get embarrassed and I hate it.
ReplyDeleteSophie,
ReplyDeleteYou did an excellent job connecting your speech to yourself. I enjoyed how you reflected your own personal clumsiness to the key points of your speech. Great Job!
Sophie,
ReplyDeleteEven when you were thinking about what to say, you laughed proving your point. I enjoyed how your speech was positive. Great visuals that matched your speech. Good job.
Sophie,
ReplyDeleteI love your analogy as your topic! Also, great visuals!!!!!!
Sophie, I really liked your topic, and going deeper into everything behind laughter! Great visuals and good job!
ReplyDeleteSophie, Nice job sharing your personal (and embarrassing) stories. I also like how you connected this to our lives.
ReplyDeleteSophie, I liked the interesting examples you had like laughter yoga, and I loved your topic!
ReplyDeleteSophie,
ReplyDeleteWay to add humor to your speech and embrace your pauses. Also, way to laugh off the mistakes... made them barely even noticeable.
Sophie, I liked how you decided to stop being embarrassed about your flaws but to laugh it off and continue being happy and laugh it off.
ReplyDeleteYour connections to your own life and gymnastics made it a lot easier to see your passion about your topic. I thought your presentation flowed really well, and you really connected to us when you were speaking.
ReplyDeleteI loved you personal stories and your attention getter. You did a good job powering through the rough patches. All around you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteSophie,
ReplyDeleteI loved your opening slide! The bloopers title was so creative! You had some great points and advice and I can tell you worked hard to write this speech. Good visuals! Nice job.
Sophie, I liked the self humour you put into your speech it enhanced the message you were trying to prove.
ReplyDeleteSophie,
ReplyDeleteYour visuals were great. The humor in your speech made it very enjoyable. I like the view you have taken on your life.
Sophie, I liked how you actually laughed during your presentation. It showed that people really do laugh under stressful situation.
ReplyDeleteI thought your topic was great! You did a great job speaking.
ReplyDeleteYour willingness to share your personal stories helped to carry your message and make it more interesting.
ReplyDeleteSophie- I liked how you took something personal and elaborated on it. Your topic was really fresh and you did a good job keeping eye contact.
ReplyDeleteWhen you talk about being clumsy and laughing it off, you really made a point from the rest of everyone's topics that you are fearless of what other people think of you. The combination between facts and stories made your
ReplyDeleteSophie!
ReplyDeleteI loved this TED talk. I have to laugh at myself more then I would like and it really made an impact on me and how I live. Awesome job.