I loved your stories and what they mean to you! Great job about explaining your family. Be a little clearer on your voice clarity and what amount of pictures you use. Overall great video.
I like how you put quotes into your memoir that connected to your pieces. The pictures were also really nice. You spoke nice and clearly, and I could follow what you were saying easily. You also did a very good job on the "So What" part of the memoir. Nice work!
Tyler I believe you were missing one memoir from the whole piece. Otherwise it was a great memoir overall and with great complex wording. Also try to use more visual aids like a picture or a drawing it could have made it better.
I loved your stories and what they mean to you! Great job about explaining your family. Be a little clearer on your voice clarity and what amount of pictures you use. Overall great video.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put quotes into your memoir that connected to your pieces. The pictures were also really nice. You spoke nice and clearly, and I could follow what you were saying easily. You also did a very good job on the "So What" part of the memoir. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteTyler I believe you were missing one memoir from the whole piece. Otherwise it was a great memoir overall and with great complex wording. Also try to use more visual aids like a picture or a drawing it could have made it better.
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