I loved your stories and what they mean to you! Great job about explaining your family. Be a little clearer on your voice clarity and what amount of pictures you use. Overall great video.
I like how you put quotes into your memoir that connected to your pieces. The pictures were also really nice. You spoke nice and clearly, and I could follow what you were saying easily. You also did a very good job on the "So What" part of the memoir. Nice work!
Tyler I believe you were missing one memoir from the whole piece. Otherwise it was a great memoir overall and with great complex wording. Also try to use more visual aids like a picture or a drawing it could have made it better.