Sunday, September 30, 2012

Ethan Hoggan Memoir (Revised)

1 comment:

  1. I think that I should've added a conclusion to my Voice Thread. My memoirs feel incomplete, or at least unrelated without one. I also should've gone through and revised my Voice Thread, and changed from saying 'a year later' and skipping from 2nd to 9th Grade, and instead have said 'in 9th Grade'. I know I went a bit over the time limit. I tried my best to keep it as short as needed, but kind of felt like my memoirs would've been taken out of perspective with any less description. Overall, I like how my visuals added to the piece. I would give my Voice Thread a 2.5 or 3 overall.