Scribe 2/11/13 Period 3

Today we got a new CSAP packet titled "America the Beautiful" it is due on Thursday (since we don't have school on Friday)

We need to create a focus question for tomorrow. When we edit with other teachers we need a focus question for what we want them to look at. THE TEACHERS WILL NOT LOOK AT YOUR WHOLE PAPER

By tomorrow you should also have the solution paragraph completed. Your conclusion should restate the thesis and review the points made, how you are going to solve, and tie back to the attention getter


Bad Words

• contractions (don't can't won't)
• personal words (I, you, me my)
• generic terms (everybody, it, they, things, stuff)
• If you ask questions, make sure you answer them

Other pieces to consider

• do you have proper citations?
• proper quotations, single double, both?
• do you have lead ins?

Our new grammar sentences are: There are pretty flowers in the garden however they don't smell very good. AND on friday february 11 2011 i auditioned for the school play.

There-adverb

are-verb

pretty-adjective

flowers-noun

in-preposition

your-possessive pronoun

garden-noun

however-adverb

they-prounoun

dont-breadks down into do and not

do-helping verb

not-adverb

smell-linking verb

very-adverb

good-adjective

on-preposition

friday-proper noun

february 11 2011-proper noun

i-prounoun

auditioned-action verbs

for-preposition

the-article

school-adjective

play-noun

For the rest of the class we had time to work on out paper, remember to have you conclusion done for tomorrow!