Scribe-Period 3 - 2/7/13

E9H Week 5: Thursday

CSAP

Softball

#38 - Written piece

• Personal piece - how does it effect you
• Example - First Line - Creates a picture in the readers head and sets the mood
• Re-write the line that you are explaining

Grammar

2 Independent Clauses, Compound sentence:

(Carla looked at herself in the mirror) and (recited the poem "Fire and Ice.")

Rocket ship - 1 subject to 2 verbs

                              ______looked______________

                             /    al            \ at                         \in 

_Carla___l_____/     nl              \herself                  \_mirror_________

                 l          \     dl                                                      \the

                              \__ l Recited l poem (Fire and Ice)

                                                       \the

1 Independent Clause, 1 Dependent Clause, Complex Sentence (CX)

(We saw A Midsummer Nights' Dream at the Buell Theater,) (after we saw the play at AHS.)

___We    l     saw     l  A Midsummer Nights' Dream

               l     \ a                  \ at

                       \ f                  \ buell theater

                         \t                          \the

                           \e

                             \r

     We  l____saw                l   play

            l         \at                  l      \the

                        \_AHS

The rest of class time was used to either, write, proofread, or brainstorm.

Second Body Paragraph

Things to remember:

• No personal words
• No contractions
• No hypothetical questions
• No questions without answers
• Citations
• Lead-ins
• Expand your vocabulary

Homework:

Redo Intro and 1st Paragraph (suggested)

Write 2nd Paragraph (suggested) 

CSAP-Softball (Due Tomorrow)

Grammar Test (Tomorrow)