Saturday, September 29, 2012

Ally Payne Memoir


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8 comments:

  1. Sorry if the voice is a little weird, I was sick when I recorded this.

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  2. Good job! I give you a 4 I think you did a good job on articulation and I liked your visuals. If anything I would try to make all the stories equal length great job!

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  4. Try to smooth out your transitions but good job and nice work with the use of prezi or whatever that website is. Generally good job.

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  5. Ally! This was very good, I liked how you weren't afraid to talk about the bad stuff and than also balance it out with the good stuff. The flow and organization of this was very good, it chronologically made sense. I feel as if I was in the story with you because you did a good job presenting the information. Your voice was very clear, just a little fast at times. I liked the use of prezi, it was very visually interesting. Overall you did a good job.

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  6. Personal Reflection:
    I thought my voice thread turned out pretty good. I had a hard time connecting them all together so I thought, in the end, I came up with a good theme and did my best to connect them. Of course I could have done better though. I thought I gave good enough background info so the listener wasn't confused and I tried to make my voice clear, but I was sick at the time, so I did my best. It turned out pretty well though considering that the next day I completely lost my voice. I also liked how I used Prezi. Most people used voice thread and I thought it was unique that I took the extra time to figure out how to add audio to Prezi and upload it. It was difficult but I'm glad I took the time to figure it out because I'm really happy with my overall project.

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  7. I thought that your project was very well done. You excelled at using Prezi, and I enjoyed the graphics. You really had a lot of great detailS about your memoirs, and I thought it was just the right length. Your speaking skills were very good as well, and you showed lots of emotion. The only recommendation I would have for you would to be more organized. Great Job!

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  8. I liked it the only thing I would say is try to make your transitions between topics so it's not like your just randomly jumping from one thing to another. Also, I would try to incorporate real images instead of just bubbles with text in them. Your voice was really clear and you used emotion, so overall good job.

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