Sophie,Your memoir was amazing! It had good transitions and a great coming together piece at the end!! You talked a little bit too soft but I just turned up the volume! Great job.
This was very well made! It looked professionally made. You kept it relevant and short, but it was still interesting, and it was tied together by a very apparent theme. Well done!Oh, and I'm loving the Britney background music.
God job on organization, your pictures and themes tied together very well. It was just long enough to cover everything without boring me to death. Your vocal inflection was spot on and you obviously practiced. Overall nice job.
You covered all the requirements and more on your piece. I was enticed to keep listening and watching. Great job!
Sophie, I really enjoyed watching your memoir project, visually it was very pleasing. I liked it because it was short and sweet but kept my attention. Your voice was a little quite or apprehensive at times, but you could still hear the emotion in it. Great job.
I think I did a pretty good job with my memoir project overall. I think I could've done a lot better but I am happy with what I produced in the time given. I feel I should've slowed down the text slides so that they were actually readable but I choose not to do that because it would mess up other parts of my memoir. I also think I could've spoken louder. Overall, I am happy with how my memoir turned out.