This is pretty good. I liked your opening and closing remarks. I think each memoir could be tied into the theme a little better. But, yea, I liked it.
I really enjoyed all the different stories you told in your memoir! At times your speaking was a little bit choppy, so you might want to consider fixing that. I agree with the above poster, in regards to your theme. I'm not sure how it all tied together, but I think if you had one more slide to conclude everything it would make your memoir really great!
Good Job Nate! I loved your stories and pictures! Your voice was extremely clear and your stories were easy to follow. I liked how it all flowed into one great topic, and how you concluded it. That showed a lot of organization. Overall, your voice thread was great! Good job!
I really enjoyed the voice thread. You were almost flawless. I could easily understand you, and you seemed to have every line down. Your introduction gave lots of background information, and I also liked your conclusion. My only recommendation would be to show more emotion. Towards the end, you seemed a little bored of talking. Overall, great job.
Great job. I appreciated the emotion in your writing and voice, and I enjoyed the stories you shared. The speech seemed somewhat disconnected because it was broken up over the slides, but otherwise, stellar work.
I feel pretty good about my Voice Thread. I feel the same as my peers about the voice-recording. The headphones didn't work for me and I recorded it on my home computer. The recordings were fairly difficult. However, I felt really confident about how it turned out. I felt like I was able to connect the memoirs and overlapping ideas pretty well. I also felt good about the quotes and analysis all being concise and appropriate to the subject.
I think your Voicethread was great. It flowed well for most of the time. Your introduction gave me a good idea. I think that the theme that tied everything together requires a little more thinking to understand, which I thought was good. I also think the number of slides you used was appropriate.
Great job Nate! I really liked your Voice thread because it was very meaningful, instead of just showing everybody your past experiences you went out of your way to teach us a lesson! Great job:)