Steven I thought that your memoir was extremely well done. You had great uses of imagery and complex wording throughout. Also I think that your memoirs go deep mentally. I also heard a bunch of great emotions throughout. I enjoyed the whole thing. Fantastic Goldy.
I feel i could have had a couple better pictures and some changes in voices. Some change in tone and emphasis could have added a lot to the presentation. Organization: 3 Content: 3 Verbal techniques: 3 Media: 4 Preparation: 4