I really enjoyed the point of how you have taken some of your experiences and applied them to your life. Your title is perfect and fits your memoir piece as a whole perfectly! Your voice inflection was very good, but I feel that it can be improved. I feel more photos could have been used, but you had enough to show your thoughts and make a picture. Based on the rubric I would give you a 3 1/4- 3 1/2.
I think that your memoir is really good! You have nice, short stories, but you also include all of your thoughts, emotions, and conclusions. It is very entertaining to watch, and I feel like you let me know exactly what you are thinking. I also really like your choice of words in the paragraphs. The only thing I would change is maybe trying to use just a little more voice inflection. Overall I thought your memoir was great, and I would give it at least a 3.5, maybe higher.
Lena, I love your conclusion. It's clear, inspiring and deep. You shared yourself with the viewer. Your organization is straightforward and effective. I like how you embedded pictures so the viewer had a visual to go along with the text. You provided just enough background information for the viewer to understand but not feel overwhelmed. The one thing I found distracting was background music. I feel like you got distracted by it too because sometimes you would make unusual pauses. You didn't use too much emotion in your voice. Media is used effectively and enhances the project. Nice job! :)
I feel like your theme really ties up everything. I feel like some voice over would have made the story a little bit stronger but the detail is very strong. Good job overall!
Me,I think that my Voicethread is well organized. I feel that I am able to provide background information and give a concise piece of my memoir. I think that if I really want to get creative then I can use a different program to improve the quality of my project and be able to have music in it. Also, I think that the music in the audio was a bit distracting and caused me to pause. I think that I could include more pictures into my project as well and give the project better transitions or flow.
I think that you should have shown the pictures and talked at the same time. It was a great presentation and was very organized. Overall, I thought it was a great presentation though. Great job telling your story!