Good job including the map and showing where you went. It was good that you had a lot of slides and a lot of pictures. It makes it more interesting.
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I loved your memoir! I heard you say, "manage" a lot, though. Maybe try a different word? I loved the inflection in your voice. The map was a wonderful addition. I loved it!
Nicole, Your voicethread was great! I loved the transitions, and how you incorporated the map to add the visual. The excerpts from your memoirs all really tied together at the end. All the pictures were great to see!
You did a great job on your memoir project. You were very descriptive and had five good stories. I like all of the pictures and how you tied it together at the end. I would give you a 3 and a half based on the rubric.
I think it was a good idea to connect them that way, it was creative and fun to watch. I liked all the personalized pictures and it was very well put together.
Nicole, Great job! I liked the pictures and how it all came together but maybe try more transitions? I loved the map picture!
I like all the pictures when you talk it made it more interesting. When you spoke it flowed well with all the visuals. Nice job.
l really enjoyed watching your video! I loved all of the different pictures and maps you had in it. It may have been a little loud, but all in all, I really enjoyed it. Really great job, Nicole!
Nicole you did a really great job on your memoir. I felt like you didn't really add any excerpts from your memoirs, it kinda sounded like you were just telling us a story. I loved all the pictures and I really liked the map you used to tell your story. Yet at times I felt like your voice sounded a little unsure though. Great Job!
I thought that you used a lot of digital aid to your presentation. You were very good with your pictures and your map. You could have showed more emotion in your voice, and sounded less nervous. You had a great theme and a great story! Very good job!