I really like your opening and closing statements. It's true. I also like all the pictures you used, they enhanced the voice thread and made me feel more like I was apart of it. The only suggestion I have is that you were talking kind of fast in the begining. Maybe speak slower in the begining. You did slow down somewhere in the middle.
Great vocal inflection, although you talked a little too fast and softly in the beginning. Also, it seemed that the voice thread was a little long. Your ideas tied together well and the pictures flowed well. Overall, you did well.
This is really good. You just needed to slow down and speak louder at the beginning and the end. Also, in your first memoir, you didn't say who Kyler and Shawn were, so it was a little confusing. Other than that, your pictures were awesome and connected with the memoirs well, and the emotion in your voice was good too. Great job! :)
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I love the title. :) It was very nice- you might have talked a bit too fast, but it flowed very nicely. Don't worry about presentations- be yourself and you'll do great.
Your whole concept was so creative and interesting, and your introduction and conclusion effectively explained it! You did speak fast, but I could still understand you; you didn't stumble over your words at all, so I actually didn't mind. However, it would have been a little better if your voice was consistent throughout the whole video. Some parts I wish you would have provided more background at, like in the beginning- who is Kyler and Shawn? You had good visuals, and I liked how you broke everything up so there would only be a short amount of reading per picture. It makes it easier and more interesting to watch, as opposed to a lot of speaking just for one picture. Overall, really great job, it was a really original concept! Would score at least 3.5, but I'm thinking closer to 4!