Sunday, September 30, 2012

Tony DePlato Memoir

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  2. I liked it, I thought the visuals were great, however it felt more like a powerpoint. I would have liked personal pictures, but over all very nice.

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  3. Good job on the memoir. I couldn't fully understand what you were saying at parts, but I really liked your visuals. I also like how you made the pictures sort of dark, and creepy to add to what you were feeling when the events took place. Good work!

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  4. I liked your voice thread. I did feel that you could have pronounced more on your words, so it would be easier to hear you. Your pictures were very interesting, and they really helped support your story.You could have made the text easier to read. With the black background, a lot of the text was indistinguishable.I thought that you had a good theme and I liked your opening quote. Good Job!

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  5. Tony-
    I feel that your speaking could have been more clear, as I could not understand you at some points. I really liked how your pictures/ text helped tell the stories of your memoirs.I also liked your introduction. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job.

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  6. It was very well organized and engaging. Great voice throughout. The subtitles on the slides added to the presentation greatly. However i could not get the audio to work. For the most part awesome presentation.
    Organization: 4 Content: 4 Verbal techniques: N\A Media: 4 Preparation: 4

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