Madison-I thought that your voice had plenty of emphasis and your visuals were great. Also, I thought your stories and reflections were great. The only thing is that you stumbled of yourself once or twice while you were speaking. Other than that, great job!
Maddi, I thought you chose a really good theme and you were able to connect everything back to it in the end. Your voice inflection was good, and your pictures really helped to tell the story and flowed nicely. It was very organized, and easy to pay attention to. The only thing that I noticed was that it was very long, but other than that I would give your memoir around a 3.5!
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Looking back I would have probably shortened my memoirs because it was over the time limit of 5 minutes. I also stumbled once or twice. Other than that, I feel that I did well when it came to my voice inflection. I think I had a lot of pictures but I feel they added to the story. I am overall happy with how my memoir piece turned out. I would give myself between a 3 1/4 to a 4.
You had really good voice emphasis and interesting excerpts! It was a little long, but it wasn't boring. Some parts could have used better transitions and some words/phrases were a little repetitive, so you could have used synonyms. I really liked all of your visuals and how you organized them. Overall, I would give you a 3-3.5. Great job!