Not all of my stories were memories, some of them I just kind of explained. I also could have included more pictures and snapshots. Before you watch know that I kind of took a different path.
I liked how you did take a different approach, and explained all your memoirs more. I also liked your visuals
I think that you did a good job. You added lots of emotion to your voice which made it more interesting to listen to. You could have added more pictures though. Overall, good job!
I think you did a good job. After reading your comment it makes me understand where you were coming from when you put this together. I would have liked to see more pictures and I was confused about the part with your brother.
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Great job. I liked all the personel pictures. The memoirs were all solid. My favorite was the rose bowl one and the boomtown classic. Your voice seemed a little far away but overall good job.Organization: 4 Content: 4 Verbal techniques: 3 Media: 4 Preparation: 4
Nice Job Jake. I liked all the pictures of the pieces you wrote. Your seemed to be very quiet and you seemed shy. If I were to grade your project, I would give you a 3 average.
Jake!I thought that your memoir did a great job on letting us get a preview of what your life looks like. Nice work keeping your presentation under five minutes but I thought that your voice could have had some more emotion. Also, towards the end your voice thread, your voice sounded more choppy. I think it was because you had recorded some of your sentences differently. The only thing I would add in would be a reflection piece in order to tie together all your memoirs and leave a lasting impression. I could not figure out what your overall theme was, but other then that nice work!