Sarah, I really liked your theme to tie everything together. All your excerpts from your memoirs really were the greatest ones.
I love your theme. You did an awesome job of relating everything and you used a lot of great description. Based on the rubric, I would give you 4.
I really enjoyed watching yours it was very well thought out and I liked how you brought in the part about walking on your toes I thought it was brave that you did that because most people wouldnt want to talk about that. It was very interesting and it kept the viewers attention.
Sarah,Great job! You kept it interesting and the theme made a lot of sense. I liked your transitions.
The personal feel of your memoir kept the reader watching, and your emotion and tone kept the reader interested. The pictures that you used were great, and the whole time, you told a story. No piece was overdone, and it was the perfect length. I loved your theme!
I think you did I really good job on your memoirs and also on bringing them together. I enjoyed watching your video, good job!
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I think you did a very good job on your memoir project and a good job on putting it together. I could tell what the theme was easily and I liked the way you made it. In general, it's a good video. Great job!
After watching my memoir there are a few things that I would change. I would try to put more inflection in my voice and really use it to help tell the story and put you in the moment. I would also try to find a different way to transition between pictures so it looks nicer. I did like how my theme came together and I really liked how I used certain text combined with a picture to introduce each topic.
I loved the reoccuring theme of game changers and all of the memoir peices were well thought out and engaging. I especially liked the one about walking on your toes. You could have had a little more inflection in your voice but good job. Organization: 4 Content: 4 Verbal techniques: 3.5 Media: 4 Preparation: 4