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Good Job,I liked the drawings but I think It would have been cool if they went while you were talking. I also liked how you were able to show not tell the events. I agree with D.C I think you stumbled a teeny bit but overall there weren't a lot of messups 3/4
Nice job David. I liked the drawings. You did a very good job speakingg except when you stummbles a few times. Your visuals were very good which tied everything together.
David-I think that your speaking was excellent; however, you did stumble over yourself once or twice while you were speaking. I thought all of your pictures were great and really helped tell the story of your memoirs. Also, I liked your drawings. The only thing you might lose a point on is your speaking. Other than that it was great.