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Me-My use of visual media was strong and helped communicate my point to the audience but my voice was pretty monotone and quiet, mostly because I had to do this late at night because of previous obligations and trying not to wake anyone up so that is my fault. I wish I could have had stronger emotion in my voice. If I could have I would have added music to the background that reflected personality through what I enjoy.
Good Job Aspen, I liked your use of prezi! I think that at the beggening you had a little too much detail but, I liked the part about your brothers. I also enjoied the part about your dog and I appreciated that you had the words on screen too! Good pictures. Nice Job
Excellent work. The presentation displayed outstanding writing, and the accompanying media complemented it well. While your writing displayed emotion, your speech did not do so as much, and somewhat lacked inflection. Make sure to speak with more pronounced emotion during any future projects, but otherwise, great job.
Aspen, I like that you did your project on Prezi. I think that it is unique, and you are able to integrate technology well. I feel that sometimes you trip over your words. Try to make your voice stronger and convey your emotions through your speaking. I felt that it was hard to read the text that was on your screenshots. Try to include more pictures as well. I enjoy the vocabulary you had in your pieces. Based on the rubric, I would give you a definite 3. :)
Aspen-What you said in your memoir was very good. You seemed to be very nervous and shy. I would have liked to see you speek up. Yu vizuales were very good. Overall nice job.
Aspen- I thought that your pictures were great and they really helped tell your memoir stories. Also, I thought that your stories were great and that all of your content was there. The only thing you might lose a point on is that your speaking was a bit quiet.