Haleigh-I love the message you send. It's hard to grow up! Your presentation flows seamlessly and your voice is the perfect combination of emotion and clarity. You did a great job of using media to enhance your project and I really enjoyed the music you put to it. Your pictures effectively aid your speech and set the scene. I can tell you spent a lot of time on this! One thing I would consider working on is background information. I felt a little confused sometimes,including with some pictures. Overall, awesome job. :)
Haleigh, your voice was really clear and you did a good job fitting your pieces together. I like your overall theme and your pictures played a nice part in your presentation. Good job!
Haleigh, I loved your memoir. It was cute, had a great message, and was interesting. I thought the pictures you added really added to your point and were super cute. I think I would give you a four in each category because you did a really good job. Everything was really well thought out and put together well. Good job!
Now looking back at my memoir and reading comments, I could have done some things differently. I could use a little more background information and clarification. I stumbled a few times during my speaking and I could have tried to make those parts more clear. Overall, I think I did a decent job.