Friday, September 28, 2012

Austin Schuett Memoir

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  2. This is good, but you don't have a theme that ties everything together. Also maybe add some emotion in your voice. I really like the peice about your sister. Overall, good job!

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  3. Good descriptions of the experiences and creative word choice. Your voice, however, was somewhat monotone and lacked inflection. Overall, great work.

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  4. I agree with Ethan in that your voice was very unemotional and it sounded as if your were reading a verdict not telling your life story. Overall though it met the expectations.

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  5. This seemed organized, but I couldn't figure out what the connecting thread was for all of them. Also, your voice sounded pretty unemotional, but other than that it was good.

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