I like your closing sentence, and how it relates back to the title/theme. I am also a swimmer and can relate to parts of your voice thread. The only thing I would change is the recordings. They were too quite, I could barely hear you. Other than that good job!
I really enjoyed your project. I liked your theme and how everything you talk/wrote about connected back to your theme. My only advice is to speak up. you were very quiet! but good job!!! :)-Emily Harden
Great job Max. I like how you had something that really did tie your memoirs together that was easy to tell. I also loved the changes between using your voice, and using excerpts from your memoirs (it that's what they were). Great job! Do speak up a bit though.
Good job. You had a great common theme and all your pictures really helped accent your theme. I also like the fact that you did a mix of text and voice. One problem though-you were very quite. Next time, just move the mic closer to your mouth or talk louder. Overall, great job.
I love how you connected all of your memoirs together and how smooth your traditions were. I love how you described some scenes, it really made the listener feel like they were there. But mostly I would say that some of your memoir excerpts might have been just a bit too short and there wasn't mush room for explanation. Over all a very good memoir.