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Your memoir was amazing! It was a very creative way to piece everything together and I really enjoyed all the personalized pictures!!
Alexandra,I loved your memoir it was so great!! I loved the way it flowed and you used good transitions. You used technology to your advantage.
It was very good! The pictures were good and you told a story, and the part where Trevor was talking completed the whole thing. Nice job!
I would say your project was advanced! You did an awesome job of making your presentation flow easily. I can see how all of your memoirs connect to make up your life. I like how you embedded a video of you dancing and how you had your friend Trevor speak too. You tell a story that provides the viewer with a window into your life. The viewer isn't lost or confused through your presentation because you do a nice job of providing enough background information but not too much that it slows your organization. Your voice was confident and smooth, language was easy to understand. I really enjoyed your presentation and it's obvious you spent a lot of time on it. Great job! :)
By far the best video I have seen yet. It all flowed wonderfully and your time and effort that were put into this showed. Your video was spectacular. I loved the song playing in the background.
I really liked your video. It was well put together, and you obviously put some thought into it. You included all of your memoirs in it nicely and I enjoyed watching it. You put lots of emphasis in your voice, and you just in general made a good video. Good job!
ALexandra, I really liked your memoir. It was really interesting hearing about your experiences in Sweden and I loved all the pictures. I also liked that you talked about your diabetes in a more positive light which kept with your theme. Overall, you did a really nice job. It was really well thought out and well put together. Oh, I also loved that you had Trevor talk.
Alexandra, I really liked your memoir. It all flowed really easily between each excerpt. I liked how your pictures related to what you were saying and they made me feel like I was there. It was cool how you had Trevor talk in your memoir because it made it feel more alive and real. I can tell you put a lot of thought into your memoir and you do a really great job overall.
Alexandra!Your memoir was amazing! Nice job going above and beyond by adding in music, and even using another person's voice. Your pictures were great and connected perfectly with each memoir. The only problem I had was figuring out when you were transitioning from one memoir to the next. Maybe next time try to make that more obvious. Also, I was not able to pick up your overall theme even though you were able to make a nice lasting impression and tie together.Other then that, great work!