I thought yours was really cool and you connected your pieces very well. I liked how you wrote out the parts of your name it was very well thought out and your voice through out the whole video was good.
Erina-Your use of visual media is really effective and unique in how you show each picture for a short time with a narration rather than just having one picture with every long narration. It makes it more interesting. You did a good job with the emotion in your voice and your use of imagery in your snapshot.
Your memoir told a story and the visuals were good. You used your voice to your advantage, which helped the presentation flow more and keep the reader interested. Nice job!
After watching other people's presentations and comparing them to mine, I think that I do have several things that I could improve, such as adding more pictures and trying to make the pieces of writing flow together more. I am, though, satisfied with my presentation because I was able to meet the requirements and I was able to speak clear.
I thought your memoir was great! Your voice was very clear and sounded really good. It told a story and wasn't choppy at all. Great job!