Nice job David, way to include many details. Good job making the reader want to keep listening. Great job overall.
David- Your organization is somewhat unclear and more emotion could have been used in the narration, but besides that you did a very good job using digital media to your advantage to support and add effect to your narration as well as gaining and holding the audience's attention.
I felt that I did a very good job on my details, introduction, and conclusion. I had very good visual aid, and I felt my voice thread had good pictures and captions. My speaking was a little weak, because I sounded a little nervous, and I did not show as much emotion as I should have. I think this is not an Advanced voice thread, but it also higher than a proficient.
meaning a 3.5
David I think overall you did a good job. I feel like it was a little unorganized and at sometimes unclear what the overall theme was. Everything other than that was very good and I really enjoyed learning about your grandpa.
David overall I think that your presentation was amazing. Great use of emotions and complex words. Your intro and conclusion I think were the best parts of the whole thing. Very fantastic overall. Awesome.