Thursday, September 27, 2012

Scott P

5 comments:

  1. You really used your voice as a tool to really paint a picture of your feelings and thoughts. (I have that same fear of flying). Your voice recordings were very good quality and your pictures were used to really enhance your voice thread. I wish you would have elaborated a bit more on the first piece, but you did a very good job

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  2. Great job Scott! I love how you talked naturally throughout the entire voice thread, and put emphasis on all of the words that needed emphasis. Your emotions were obvious. Great description of all of your memoirs, too.

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  3. Scott
    I loved your presentation. It had a good amount of emotion and your voice was flaw free and smooth. The pictures made everything tie together. The word choice was great and I really liked each of the stories you told.

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  4. Scott you did a great job on your voice thread. It's great how your voice really flows clearly throughout the whole presentation. Your voice is also good quality. You explained your memoirs perfectly. Great job!

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  5. Hey Dude! Your voice was nice and clear, and you spoke at a very good pace. Along with that, you added nice smooth transitions from one slide to the next, and connected each to your main theme. I might have liked it if you had added pictures of yourself from these experiences, and not gotten all of your images off of the internet. Other than that, Great job!

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