Riley! Great voice thread! I heard tons of emotion in your voice (which was really clear), and your pictures enhance your voice thread. One suggestion would be to lessen the amount of pictures, to make it less choppy. Your voice thread has a great overall theme, and it was great how you explained it in the beginning. I really liked your collage at the end, and how you concluded your voice thread. It brought the whole thing together which was the main goal! Overall, fantastic job Riley! :)
Nice job Riley. I really like your theme and your five different stories. You use lots of emotion and description and I can tell why each story matters to you and has changed you. I enjoyed the various pictures and how you tied it all together at the end. Awesome! I'd give you a 4.
That was really good Riley. You had a great theme for to connect your stories. All of the pictures helped tell the story and your voice had a lot of emotion and it was really clear. I really like how you introduced us to the theme first and ended with a reference to the theme.
I gave myself the ratings I did for the following reasons. I think I had strong ideas and content to tie all my points together. I think I had strong voice inflection, but it could have been better. I feel that I did a good job overall, but next time I would maybe lessen the amount of pictures.
Riley! Great voice thread! I heard tons of emotion in your voice (which was really clear), and your pictures enhance your voice thread. One suggestion would be to lessen the amount of pictures, to make it less choppy. Your voice thread has a great overall theme, and it was great how you explained it in the beginning. I really liked your collage at the end, and how you concluded your voice thread. It brought the whole thing together which was the main goal! Overall, fantastic job Riley! :)
ReplyDeleteNice job Riley. I really like your theme and your five different stories. You use lots of emotion and description and I can tell why each story matters to you and has changed you. I enjoyed the various pictures and how you tied it all together at the end. Awesome! I'd give you a 4.
DeleteThat was really good Riley. You had a great theme for to connect your stories. All of the pictures helped tell the story and your voice had a lot of emotion and it was really clear. I really like how you introduced us to the theme first and ended with a reference to the theme.
DeleteI gave myself the ratings I did for the following reasons. I think I had strong ideas and content to tie all my points together. I think I had strong voice inflection, but it could have been better. I feel that I did a good job overall, but next time I would maybe lessen the amount of pictures.
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