Nice job including text on each of your slides. It makes the listeners understand what your saying. Also good job connecting how all of them relate to fun.
I liked how you explained your theme at the beginning. Your excerpts were a little short. I really want to know more about your stories. I also like how you put text on your slides!
I thought you did a very good job on your voice thread. You could have showed a little more emotion when speaking, and I thought, your introduction was a little weak. You had great pictures, and I was impressed with your details and memoir pieces.
Dean- You really did have fun! I like the stories you picked, they are cute and well-written. Your voice is confident and easy to understand. You used big words and your organization was easy to follow. You used good background information so the viewer could see where you were coming from. Your theme, having fun, is simple, yet goes deeper and reminds the viewer to stop and smell the roses. I also like your pictures, they go along with the stories. The one thing I would have done to make your project better is to take advantage of the media available to you! Overall, nice work!
Dean, I think that you have excellent flow. You are able to say things clearly and with great tone. I like that you had descriptive language and conveyed your feelings in your voice. I would recommend that you give more background information on some of your stories so the listener can understand. Also, you repeat yourself a bit in some of your sentences. Furthermore, more pictures would have been beneficial. I'd give you about a 2.5 on this project based on the rubric. Nice job. :)
I think I could have included more background info to help my viewers understand my stories a little better. I also could have included more of the media section. The one other thing is maybe make my stories a little longer.
Nice job including text on each of your slides. It makes the listeners understand what your saying. Also good job connecting how all of them relate to fun.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained your theme at the beginning. Your excerpts were a little short. I really want to know more about your stories. I also like how you put text on your slides!
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a very good job on your voice thread. You could have showed a little more emotion when speaking, and I thought, your introduction was a little weak. You had great pictures, and I was impressed with your details and memoir pieces.
ReplyDeleteDean- You really did have fun! I like the stories you picked, they are cute and well-written. Your voice is confident and easy to understand. You used big words and your organization was easy to follow. You used good background information so the viewer could see where you were coming from. Your theme, having fun, is simple, yet goes deeper and reminds the viewer to stop and smell the roses. I also like your pictures, they go along with the stories. The one thing I would have done to make your project better is to take advantage of the media available to you! Overall, nice work!
ReplyDeleteDean, I think that you have excellent flow. You are able to say things clearly and with great tone. I like that you had descriptive language and conveyed your feelings in your voice. I would recommend that you give more background information on some of your stories so the listener can understand. Also, you repeat yourself a bit in some of your sentences. Furthermore, more pictures would have been beneficial. I'd give you about a 2.5 on this project based on the rubric. Nice job. :)
ReplyDeleteI think I could have included more background info to help my viewers understand my stories a little better. I also could have included more of the media section. The one other thing is maybe make my stories a little longer.
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