This memoir was really great! You kept it interesting and relevant. The way you used emotion in your voice made your voice thread very easy to understand. I thought it was a good length, but maybe expand on your ending a bit more?
Like Monica, I think that your emotion that is shown in your voice is really good, but I think that sometimes it feels like there are some awkward pauses in your speaking. I think that your memoir is good, and I can totally connect with a lot of your memories (which adds a whole new level to the memoir). I think that you did a nice job overall
Your memoir is awesome! I agree with Monica and Rebecca - the emotion in your voice is really great. I loved your pictures, especially the first one of the eye. :) Adding some sound effects, like the keyboard typing, was a really nice touch, as well as the introductory slides. Great job!
Okay, so I didn't really like my own memoir. It fulfilled the requirements, but I could have had more emotion I think. I used an introductory picture and a concluding picture, which seemed to really help the audience remember the theme. My voice sounded funny, but there isn't much I can do about that (I had to record this with my scratchy sick voice). It was over five minutes, which is not good. But, it seemed to move logically and it was pretty clear what my five memoirs were. The background information was godd, and there were good opening and closing parts. I tried to use emotion, but I'm not a super emotional person, so that was kind of difficult. I practiced beforehand a little and I had spent time preparing, especially in perfecting the memoirs themselves. So, yeah, I think it was pretty good.
This memoir was really great! You kept it interesting and relevant. The way you used emotion in your voice made your voice thread very easy to understand. I thought it was a good length, but maybe expand on your ending a bit more?
ReplyDeleteLike Monica, I think that your emotion that is shown in your voice is really good, but I think that sometimes it feels like there are some awkward pauses in your speaking. I think that your memoir is good, and I can totally connect with a lot of your memories (which adds a whole new level to the memoir). I think that you did a nice job overall
ReplyDeleteYour memoir is awesome! I agree with Monica and Rebecca - the emotion in your voice is really great. I loved your pictures, especially the first one of the eye. :) Adding some sound effects, like the keyboard typing, was a really nice touch, as well as the introductory slides. Great job!
ReplyDeleteOkay, so I didn't really like my own memoir. It fulfilled the requirements, but I could have had more emotion I think. I used an introductory picture and a concluding picture, which seemed to really help the audience remember the theme. My voice sounded funny, but there isn't much I can do about that (I had to record this with my scratchy sick voice). It was over five minutes, which is not good. But, it seemed to move logically and it was pretty clear what my five memoirs were. The background information was godd, and there were good opening and closing parts. I tried to use emotion, but I'm not a super emotional person, so that was kind of difficult. I practiced beforehand a little and I had spent time preparing, especially in perfecting the memoirs themselves. So, yeah, I think it was pretty good.
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