Nice memoir! I really liked how you combined the pictures and the writing. You spoke really clearly, however i think that you could have spoken in a little less of a monotone. You had some really good writing, but I didn't hear that excitement in your voice. It was still a really good memoir, there are just a few things you need to fix.
Great voice clarity I could understand everything you said. More excitement in your voice. Great stories about your family! Maybe double check some of the mistakes, good job overall
Zach I think you did a great job with your voice thread. You did an awesome job at explaining thing and your voice was very clear. I did n't find any mistakes! Well done
I really liked your transitions and how you incorporated specific details without making it too choppy. Your images tied along with your speaking part very well, but I would try to talk with more inflection, but your voice was clear otherwise.
I worked hard to develop outlines that I made into one script to make my voice thread more organized. I put my memoirs in time order to make them have a logical order to them. I also had an opening statement, but not much of an closing statement. I would give myself a 3 because I had most of the content necessary but not all of it. I provided background information that was in context and from other people comments I feel like I did a pretty good job keeping the audience entertained and attentive. With those factors I would give myself a 3. I spoke loudly while recording, I also spoke at a reasonable pace so people could understand me. I also pronounced words well so the audience could understand me. The only things I could have done better was my inflection. I did have emotion in my voice, but maybe not as much as I could have, that is why I would give myself a 3.5. My pictures were all relevant and used to enhance my voice recordings. I also feel that they pictures were strategic in the sense that they were in time order to make the stories easier to progress through. I would give myself a 3.5 in this section. I prepared a lot for this recording. I wrote out a script for each segment and I practiced it before recording and I would record multiple times until I got my script right on the recording. I also stayed close to the time limit. I would give myself a 4 in this section. Overall, I feel like I did a very good job and I put a lot of time into this project so my overall score would be a 17 out of 20 or an 85%.
Great job Zach! I really enjoyed your memoir and thought that your voice clarity was great! Overall you did a really good job, just add a little excitement to your voice and you will be golden. Overall great job.
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ReplyDeleteNice memoir! I really liked how you combined the pictures and the writing. You spoke really clearly, however i think that you could have spoken in a little less of a monotone. You had some really good writing, but I didn't hear that excitement in your voice. It was still a really good memoir, there are just a few things you need to fix.
ReplyDeleteGreat voice clarity I could understand everything you said. More excitement in your voice. Great stories about your family! Maybe double check some of the mistakes, good job overall
ReplyDeleteZach I think you did a great job with your voice thread. You did an awesome job at explaining thing and your voice was very clear. I did n't find any mistakes! Well done
ReplyDeleteI really liked your transitions and how you incorporated specific details without making it too choppy. Your images tied along with your speaking part very well, but I would try to talk with more inflection, but your voice was clear otherwise.
ReplyDeleteI worked hard to develop outlines that I made into one script to make my voice thread more organized. I put my memoirs in time order to make them have a logical order to them. I also had an opening statement, but not much of an closing statement. I would give myself a 3 because I had most of the content necessary but not all of it. I provided background information that was in context and from other people comments I feel like I did a pretty good job keeping the audience entertained and attentive. With those factors I would give myself a 3. I spoke loudly while recording, I also spoke at a reasonable pace so people could understand me. I also pronounced words well so the audience could understand me. The only things I could have done better was my inflection. I did have emotion in my voice, but maybe not as much as I could have, that is why I would give myself a 3.5. My pictures were all relevant and used to enhance my voice recordings. I also feel that they pictures were strategic in the sense that they were in time order to make the stories easier to progress through. I would give myself a 3.5 in this section. I prepared a lot for this recording. I wrote out a script for each segment and I practiced it before recording and I would record multiple times until I got my script right on the recording. I also stayed close to the time limit. I would give myself a 4 in this section. Overall, I feel like I did a very good job and I put a lot of time into this project so my overall score would be a 17 out of 20 or an 85%.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Zach! I really enjoyed your memoir and thought that your voice clarity was great! Overall you did a really good job, just add a little excitement to your voice and you will be golden. Overall great job.
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